Leaving

Leaving

Warm,cozy and stiffe  stiff  Jack butler woke up to my mum high pitched screaming in his face saying over and over again “Jack wake up ya dads leaving!” So he got up as usale but Jack didn't see dad.”Mom where's dad?” I said to her but she didn't say anything she just told me to get in the car.”but im not going in the car with my pjs on!” say Jack shouting.Then he really did it his mum turned around and smacked i'm in the cheek. While they were driving Jack saw his best friends big brother.I think he's only 20? But anyway his friend Tom is gonna be relieved.

Jack and his mum got out of there baby blue car and saw dad on a 88 22 feet train then Jack got left up feeling the oil slipping down his shirt hugging his dad tite and cried he had his last tear Jack  watched his dad leave in the horizon not knowing where he was going Jack thinned it was work or the or was it Army?  He didn't know but he keeped on waving at him and his friends THE END!