Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Olympic Persuasive Writting

Cheating

I think that the Russians are cheating because they are using a special medicine that makes them faster and that is  cheating.

Firstly, it is not fair to other competitors in the Olympics if people find out that some competitors have been cheating.  Those competitors would then be kicked out or even punished.

Secondly, it is breaking the  rules. Rule breaking is not showing grit, Zest, Action, Attitude and Achievement .

Thirdly, it will cause a fight about  who gets the  medal. They will have a medal when they don't deserve it. Really it is all about having fun anyway not who gets first, second and third.

Fourthly, people who  cheat should never be able to compete in the Olympics because the coaches say or the judges say so.

I think that  some  Russians
should not be able to compete in the Olympics because it will cause a fight and people will get  a medal  when they don't deserve it and it is not  fair to  other competitors.   


Be Honest.